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Kibushi
Number of posts : 52 Registration date : 2007-06-13
| Subject: Poetry Mon Jun 18, 2007 11:02 pm | |
| Something I haven't done in a while. Anyone who writes knows the horror of writer's block. LOL So, while I try to break free from it, here's two of my older ones. I'll add some more later.
Second Heaven
Whisper softly in my ear, once more tonight
as we lay awake in each other's arms
Listening to the evening rain as it gently tolls
the passing of the darkness to the dawn
The lingering fragrance of your perfume
as it dances slowly through the air
is it this that fills me with light and warmth
or the unerring beauty within your stare
And your kiss, such a vivid memory upon my lips
of the countless nights spent by your side
Where the closest I've come to finding Heaven
was to merely hold you tightly through the night
Willing Abduction
The velvet night slowly falls once more
and blankets your body in my arms
The grass holds you gently as you drift off to dream
and softly steal away my heart
My body moves of its own accord
as my fingers work their way through your hair
The stars may shine bright in the sky above
but Heaven's beauty lies beside me, here | |
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warangel
Number of posts : 64 Age : 39 Location : Charlotte, N.C. Registration date : 2007-06-15
| Subject: Re: Poetry Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:49 am | |
| nice poem. Let me guess the poems are dedicted to the nicest lady on the net. here goes one.
Warangel
I hear a large bang. Every thing illuminates by light and fire I run from the blast Dirt ,heat, and ash engulf my body. I will go home. Too many people care about me to just die in this hell. There’s an ear piercing scream My heart is in my throat as I run back towards the scream and debris. I can’t see. It feels like a black hole with awful screaming surrounding me I feel around, Just to find my way and accidentally some thick liquid. It can’t be oil. I can feel my heart jump farther up my throat. It must be blood. I yell, “I’m here, don’t panic, and talk softly! You’ll waste energy panicking!” I hear a soft whimper and realize it’s a little girl. Bombs are so stupid! The thing about bombs is that they kill all, Friend or foe. I find the little girl crying in a lighted corner. Sunlight is great. The girl looks like an angel glowing in the sunlight. Thank goodness for cracks. The crack in the wall let me see where the girl has been injured. She bleeds from the neck. Blood oozes slowly from the jugular vein. I tell her to pray. I can’t do nothing else but watch the Iraqi girl die in prayer. She truly is an angel I cried today with sadness and some joy. Joy came from living It’s a shame that innocents and little angels must die in battle. It can’t be day one. | |
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Preacherman
Number of posts : 129 Age : 47 Location : NWGA Registration date : 2007-06-17
| Subject: Re: Poetry Tue Jun 19, 2007 9:05 pm | |
| hmmm, interesting to say the least, i like it War
ill follow suit heres one of my old ones
My Journey
Wet, naked screaming from the cold Forced from my perfect eden Cutout of my perpetual supply My journey begins
Clumsy and foolish I fnd a way Sucking the life from me as I go along Pushed from one extreme to the next Finding my journey imposible to bear
Tired and wore without relief Fighting to cling to a vapor Viewing all in time what I have done Into enternity my journey is over
I wish I could flee from here Back into the crypic confines Welcoming and worryless Where my journey beagn | |
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Tcassidy2008
Number of posts : 26 Age : 43 Location : Hot Springs,Arkansas Registration date : 2007-06-14
| Subject: Re: Poetry Fri Jun 22, 2007 3:31 am | |
| What wonderful poams ..I cant write poems | |
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Preacherman
Number of posts : 129 Age : 47 Location : NWGA Registration date : 2007-06-17
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sat Jun 23, 2007 11:47 am | |
| try, its not as hard as you think. | |
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Samayou_chan Admin
Number of posts : 90 Age : 41 Location : Pageland, SC Registration date : 2007-06-13
| Subject: Re: Poetry Tue Jun 26, 2007 4:04 pm | |
| i cant write poems either. Very good guys!!!! | |
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warangel
Number of posts : 64 Age : 39 Location : Charlotte, N.C. Registration date : 2007-06-15
| Subject: Re: Poetry Fri Jun 29, 2007 8:58 pm | |
| Thanks for the compilemen preacherman. You're poems cool as well.
Tcassidy2008 and samayou, try writing what you feel but be descriptive. For instance, if I wrote a love poem, I would write:
As I kissed her lips, It felt like kissing water on a hot day. Except My mouth wasn't just quenched, My esscence was as well. My life gained new meaning, now that I have my life to share.
Just try it and see what happens. I'm sure you two can write excellent poetry. Try writing about the one you love, Samayou/Tcassidy. | |
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Preacherman
Number of posts : 129 Age : 47 Location : NWGA Registration date : 2007-06-17
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:39 am | |
| anything works, i wrote this one about a squeaking door
WD40
Listen!, hear that?!, That sound, there again! Poring, seaping, tearing through my brain Finding its twisted way down my bones Searing on down, deeper onto my soul The sound of bone against steel Left over onlya fine meal Wd40 could have cured it all But instead it was left to squall | |
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Kibushi
Number of posts : 52 Registration date : 2007-06-13
| Subject: Re: Poetry Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:24 am | |
| His bleeding heart, an open tome laid bare for all to see In a silent grave, he buried hope of the woman from his childhood dreams
*kinda short, but written for something my brother's going through now. If any muse allows, I'll add to it later on* | |
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Samayou_chan Admin
Number of posts : 90 Age : 41 Location : Pageland, SC Registration date : 2007-06-13
| Subject: Re: Poetry Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:35 am | |
| SWEET KIBUSHI! Cant wait to read the rest of it! Very good! | |
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Preacherman
Number of posts : 129 Age : 47 Location : NWGA Registration date : 2007-06-17
| Subject: Re: Poetry Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:02 am | |
| hmmm, ok life experience
heres one i wrote about 6 years ago tell me what you think
Eyes of Innocense In the eyes of innocense There is no pain or fear Where only love is abundant Where no evil will adhere
Penitrating through in the end The unjust angered and the lies In the eyes of innocense True feelings can not hide
Thrown back emotions Peace now all but gone Didnt want to see good-by The fight now only left to haunt
Sorrow brings time Too much time to think Lost in an asylum Pushed to the brink
Fought with all within Of an end to no avail Never wanted to see give up Dear God Why Did It Fail?! | |
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